My Pod Partner had a lot of insightful ideas and suggestions to give me in order to improve help me improve my research post. The most important one was adding in my citations. I was already aware of this but hadn’t completed it yet because I usually leave that as the final step for my research post. Another thing my partner mentioned was to add headings to my paragraphs as it would make each paragraph stand out more. After she mentioned that I did it right away because it does make each paragraph stand out, but it was also something in Colins suggested criteria that I missed. She also mentioned getting rid of some of the unneeded information in my initial paragraph. I completely agreed that getting rid of it would make my research post more concise and to the point, but I decided to keep it because it was important to me that my audience knew why I choose to switch my focus and to inform them on how little research is being done in the area of online learning for K-12 students. The K-12 system is already so grossly underfunded that I felt as though I couldn’t leave that part out.